you can set my heart to your watch

give me a title for this-- [my fan]

Nov. 5th, 2009 at 8:55 AM

verse 1

her own presence was a rain of thunder
she came along to sweep me off my feet.
i didn't have a chance, it was one glance
and i fell to hazardous fantasies.

verse 2

but then nothing came to reality
when she left, she left my heart bipolar,
saturated with her printed farewells,
maybes, disappointments, insanities.

chorus

i took the next available taxi
and she had a ticket for the train alone.
in her pocket she carried a small note,
"wait for me, 'til the day when i come home"

bridge

i wept my animosity, say bye
love bye, where my words failed to make a sound

verse 3

if there were windows to view my answers
i would take you high, to soft-stained glasses
show the tints, colours and intricacies
on the day you cried you believed in me

chorus

i took the next available taxi
and she had a ticket for the train alone.
in her pocket she carried a small note,
"wait for me, 'til the day when i come home"

here is the reason why this exists:

ninetyninetyfive (2:00:27 AM): those lyrics are familiar...
escapelockandkey (2:01:25 AM): it's actually from a book. ^_^
ninetyninetyfive (2:06:41 AM): really? O.O
escapelockandkey (2:08:41 AM): yes. crush by richard siken.
ninetyninetyfive (2:10:59 AM): maybe i'm thinking of something similar
escapelockandkey (2:11:14 AM): you should find out and tell me~
ninetyninetyfive (2:30:01 AM): i can't.. find it >.>
ninetyninetyfive (2:30:11 AM): maybe i should just make up my own lyrics
ninetyninetyfive (2:30:13 AM): haha
escapelockandkey (2:30:58 AM): yes, you should. write me a song about how you feel right this second~

thanks kibum-ah~